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I can see that you put some effort into this movie, so I'll try to be constructive: WTF is going on in the movie? I couldn't make heads or tails of the "story"... try to clarify it, or, if there isn't any, try to "create" one. You could also try giving the player more choices, the present amount is very small. Some drawings I saw weren't bad... you could have improved them, if you dedicacted more time. To sum things up, I recomend the 1rst thing to do is to try make things more coherent, i.e. try to make a "plausibel" universe and story for you movie.